Graduate writing in marine and environmental sciences
OCG533,
Fall 2002
Syllabus
Instructor: Kenneth
A. Rahn
Center for Atmospheric Chemistry Studies
Graduate School of Oceanography
CACS Room 212; 874-6713
E-mail: krahn@uri.edu
Course’s web site: http://karws.gso.uri.edu/OCG533/02Fall/OCG533Fall02.html
Goals
This course in scientific writing has
three main goals: (1) to show graduate students how to set up a scientific paper
and to make informed choices about its content, structure, and style; (2) to
show how to use the English language to communicate the desired message clearly,
unambiguously, and efficiently; and (3) to show how to use the language to
communicate the message to the widest possible audience. Communicating correctly
and clearly means choosing the right words (diction) and putting them in the
right places (grammar and syntax), so that the reader gets the precise message
you intend to transmit. Communicating efficiently means using optimum structures
and choice of words (rhetoric and style) to ensure that the reader grasps the
essence with minimum effort. Communicating widely means maintaining enough rigor
to satisfy professional demands while keeping the language simple enough that it
can be understood by nonspecialists and maybe even by nonscientists. To reach
these goals, this course takes a rigorous approach to syntax, grammar,
rhetorical principles, compositional style, and the journal article, while
touching as well on selected societal aspects of scientific writing.
Textbook
Principles
of Scientific Writing, Version 3.1d, September 2002, Kenneth A. Rahn. Our
class notes and main source of information. (To be updated and supplemented during the semester)
Suggested
reference books
(1) Scientific
Style and Format: The CBE Manual for Authors, Editors, and Publishers,
Sixth Edition. The classic guide to editorial style in science, now with
expanded coverage in nonbiological sciences.
(2) Instant
English Handbook, Madeline
Semmelmeyer and Donald A. Bolander A very good pocket reference for grammatical
matters.
(3) Style:
Ten Lessons in Clarity and Grace, Fourth Edition, Joseph M. Williams. The key to a readable style and effective
sentences and paragraphs. This book will inspire you to high-class writing, even
in science. We will even try to move beyond it in some ways.
(4) The
New York Public Library WRITER’S GUIDE TO STYLE AND USAGE, Andrea J.
Sutcliffe, Ed. Although not directed specifically toward scientific writers, it
is one of the best references of style and usage I have seen. I recommend it for
every scientific writer’s library.
Format
We meet three times a week for 50 minutes
or more. In the first part of the semester, I will give written assignments for
most classes. Because of the volume of material we must cover and the importance
of regularly practicing skills in your new “language,” these assignments and
their associated reading will normally take some hours to complete. I will not
ask of you more than nine hours outside class in a given week—an average of
three hours per assignment. If for a particular week you find that you are about
to exceed this limit, you may quit without penalty, and I will assume
responsibility for making those assignments too long. Assignments are returned
graded and annotated at the next class. Late assignments may be graded 50% off.
Throughout the semester you will work on
writing a journal article that will be due at the end. We will review the
possible structures for the paper and the format, material, and styles
appropriate to each, and then you will choose among them and gradually construct
the sections as we discuss their principles in class.
Writing
the paper
You should write your paper on data that
you have generated yourself. If that is not possible, we will find some
alternative that is mutually acceptable. The paper does not need to be long—in
fact, shorter may be better, especially for students writing their first paper.
Try to choose your topic early and starting working on the paper as soon as
possible—the process will take much longer than you think! Near the middle of
the class, I will begin meeting with students individually to discuss their
progress. Experience has shown that these meetings can be valuable. Take
advantage of me and start producing drafts sooner rather than later.
Grading
I am tough but fair. All is structured to
help you succeed. Homework assignments account for two-thirds of the grade, the
final paper one-third. By putting forth serious effort on all assignments, you
can guarantee yourself a good grade. We will have no midterm or final exam
unless there is an outcry to the contrary.
Provisional Schedule (Chapter numbers of notes in parentheses)
Week | The English language | The scientific paper | Preparing the paper |
1: Sept. 4–9 | Parts of speech, including phrases and clauses. Diagramming. (Appendix C) | Choose topic. | |
2: Sept. 11–16 | Nouns; verbs, and their phrases. Stylistic matters. (15, 16, Appendix C) | ||
3: Sept. 18–23 | Understanding modification, incl. restrictive and nonrestrictive. (13,14) | Data complete and interpreted. | |
4: Sept. 25–30 | Structure and style of sentences. (11) | ||
5: Oct. 2–7 | Structure and style of paragraphs. (8) | Preliminary figures and tables. | |
6: Oct. 9–16 | Evolution; higher criticism; steps in scientific writing. (2–4, Appendices A, B) | Order conclusions by importance. Choose major message. | |
7: Oct. 18–23 | Sections and their contents. (5,6) | Choose journal, style, sections; write protoabstract; compose outline(s). | |
8: Oct. 25–30 | Effective sections. (10) | Draft of Introduction, Materials and methods. | |
9: Nov. 1–6 | Effective abstracts. (9) | Draft of Results, Discussion or Results and Discussion. | |
10: Nov. 8–15 | Punctuation. (Appendix C) | Draft of Conclusions or Summary (if needed), plus Abstract. | |
11: Nov. 18–22 | Revising language. (19,20) | Revising content. | Revise paper. |
12: Nov. 25–Dec. 2 | " (as needed) | " (as needed) | Revise paper. |
13: Dec. 4–9 | " (as needed) | " (as needed) | Revise paper. |